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E.A. Colquitt's avatar

Welcome to TT, Nika! I'm so glad you clarified what the potion actually does 😅

This was a nice read - almost like a slice-of-life piece 😊

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Ángel Michel's avatar

Nika, I’m so happy to see that you are feeling better 🥰 and inspired to write again. I believe we have to take care of ourselves first and foremost, and that in turn allows us to take better care of others and feel truly free and inspired to be creative.

I liked your story very much, specially the cute tension you gave your main protagonist toward the Prince. I liked that you didn’t have her just dying to meet him. Instead, I felt she had real personality. I also really liked that you added her saying she doesn’t do things to harm or force others. For me, I feel this is one thing I look for in the stories I like to read, for them to align with the values I have for my life too. Maybe I’m too picky that way, but for me, it is the process by which I can enjoy things and feel at peace at the end of the day. (Sorry if that was long and hopefully it made sense 😌)

Anyway, your story was fun, it reminded me of the movie Hocus Pocus. I’m not sure if you’ve seen it, but it is funny and I could see the tension between your main characters being fun like that. I just had one question: what was her name? He only calls her witch and I feel maybe I needed to know her name in order to feel closer to her as the main character. Keep shining Nika ✨👍☺️

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